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Tuesday, 4 July 2017

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 The Beach
Do you know what Ryan did last weekend?He went to the beach with his family.First,Ryan built a huge sand castle.Then, he collected seashells and rocks.After that,he went swimming with his brother. Ryan had a wonderful time at the beach.

 Anthony visits Nick
On Sunday,Anthony went over to Nick’s house to play basketball.They played a game of one-on-one.anthony made six baskets,but nick made eight. Nick was the winner.After the game,both boys went inside to have some snacks and watch television.

                 


                       

2 comments:

  1. Hi Soane, I like the way how you wrote your writing and it's just so amazing. Well Done!

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  2. nice blog soane i really enjoy reading it keep it up

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