This activity took a while to think about, but I really used my thoughts and BOOM! I had a great topic to write about. I have written my own chorus to a song I will probably finish later on. This is about the right ways on having a great life. I put in a image showing a person not giving up well he is pushing a heavy sack of hay I think. I know I'm not good at writing things like these, but I never gave up and here you have a chorus I wrote myself.
> Have a great look <
ēnā koe Soane
ReplyDeleteYour chorus is cool! It has a positive message weaved throughout and some of the rhyming is really mature, ka rawe e hoa!
I really like how you’ve included some lyrics in parenthesis. I read it as a call and response technique, pretty neat Soane!
Keep up the good work
Mā te wā
Cheers,
Ben