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Thursday 19 March 2020

Nellie the Elephant ( My own Story )

BOOM!!! everything went very loud when the great Nellie the elephant went stomping right into the circus with her 4 gigantic feet. The act started with two cheeky monkeys juggling sharp knives. Up and down the knife's went looking for something to  stab ,but luckily these monkeys were being one hundred percent careful. The  performance was highly extraordinary, when the mighty Nellie came marching in like she was a furious soldier.

As she was walking in, one of the circus animals which was a tiger, came zooming in with its fire ring. Suddenly Nellie spun around and accidently whooped the fire ring straight out of the tigers hand. The fire ring went up into the air flying and flying when it finally touched the circus tent. The tent burst into flames. Nellie was petrified she didn't know what to do, all she could do is look at all the danger she caused.

A few moments later Nellie was kicked out of the circus crushing all her hopes of being famous. Nellie was sorry for what she did but she knew she was never gonna get her job back. She packed as much stuff she could and went on searching for a new home for her to rest in.

Who knows, she might even start her own circus? 

2 comments:

  1. Hey Soane,
    I like how you retold the story Nellie the ellephant in your own. It was pretty cool!
    Keep up the good work :)

    -Uinita

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    1. Thanks for the feedback Uinita:) Looking forward to seeing your blogs during the lock down :)

      By Soane

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