Everything went very quiet as I tiptoed into the living room, trying to see what my family was doing. I stood there waiting for someone to speak ,but no sound replied back. I was feeling a bit nervous so I sat down real quietly so I couldn't break the silence in the room. I took a huge look around the room and the only thing I saw was people just sitting down and completely no sound was coming out. It was very strange because my family is always like a circus everyday creating a big amount of noise.
I was getting very annoyed because I was hoping to speak to some of my family members , but since they were being one hundred percent quiet, I went to the kitchen to have a quick snack. I opened the cupboard and it made a humongous sound which reached all the way to the living room. All of sudden my family begins to say only one word ……”Shhh ”. When they said that, I knew I had to be quiet for the rest of the day.
I had no one to talk to so I went to my room for the rest of the day to keep all the silence going. After about four hours I left my room to check on my family. I walked in the living room and everyone was dead asleep. They all looked like lazy zombies stacking on each other. The room was filled with silence , but still I giggled for a moment and went back to my room to rest . I didn’t really know why they settled down in the living room and stayed silent for twenty four hours , maybe they were pranking me , Who knows ?
I was getting very annoyed because I was hoping to speak to some of my family members , but since they were being one hundred percent quiet, I went to the kitchen to have a quick snack. I opened the cupboard and it made a humongous sound which reached all the way to the living room. All of sudden my family begins to say only one word ……”Shhh ”. When they said that, I knew I had to be quiet for the rest of the day.
I had no one to talk to so I went to my room for the rest of the day to keep all the silence going. After about four hours I left my room to check on my family. I walked in the living room and everyone was dead asleep. They all looked like lazy zombies stacking on each other. The room was filled with silence , but still I giggled for a moment and went back to my room to rest . I didn’t really know why they settled down in the living room and stayed silent for twenty four hours , maybe they were pranking me , Who knows ?
The House of Silence is a great story. If I was a character in the story, I do not know if I will be scared of annoyed that no one is talking to me. Such good writing that your readers feel as if they are in the story. Keep it up Soane. Oh also do you like finishing your narratives with questions? I am starting to notice it as a common ending.
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