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Monday 22 February 2021

The Treaty of Waitangi - Poem

The Treaty of Waitangi


Causing so much chaos

Lives have been sacrificed

For a piece of paper


Bang!!!

Shooting emerges

As Lives have been taken

Bunch of Brave Buff Chiefs

Come in as the sun awakens


The treaty has been signed multiple times 

Though they know they’ve been tricked 

This was horrible and highly unacceptable 

 When the Maori's find out it will be unforgettable 

 

The signing carries on

On two versions of the treaty

If only the Maoris knew

The British were cheeky


The madness has ended

The scam is over

The British needed land

That's why they took over


Unlucky for the Maori

It has been a disaster

Which was better of the treaty

Before or After?








 






 




 

7 comments:

  1. Hey Soane, This poem is so so so good, I really loved reading it, keep up the great job.

    Ali-Jon

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  2. Wow Soane this such a great poem. I really like how much detail there is. It paints a realistic picture in my head. Keep up the great work.

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  3. Hello Soane, your poem was fascinating keep up the really great work:)

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  4. Great job Soane I really enjoyed reading your poem .Keep up the good work!

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  5. Hey Soane,
    your poem is really amusing.This has so much facts and detail. :) Keep it up :)

    - Maria

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  6. Hi Soane its Gideon
    I really like your poem its really interesting keep up the great work and keep blogging

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  7. HEY Soane Im really im impressive of you Treaty Of waitangi Keep Up The Good Work.
    -Genevieve

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