The Treaty of Waitangi
Causing so much chaos
Lives have been sacrificed
For a piece of paper
Bang!!!
Shooting emerges
As Lives have been taken
Bunch of Brave Buff Chiefs
Come in as the sun awakens
The treaty has been signed multiple times
Though they know they’ve been tricked
This was horrible and highly unacceptable
When the Maori's find out it will be unforgettable
The signing carries on
On two versions of the treaty
If only the Maoris knew
The British were cheeky
The madness has ended
The scam is over
The British needed land
That's why they took over
Unlucky for the Maori
It has been a disaster
Which was better of the treaty
Before or After?
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